"...I dare not speak loudly, for fear of shocking the people in the sky."

As Zhu Yuanshi finished reading, some people's faces were amazed and delighted, while others frowned.

A very good five-character and four-line poem that conforms to the norms of regulated verse.

There is the heroism of ordinary people in the poem.

But there is a sense of awe in the poem.

For everyone, if this poem is hung in the Star Gazing Tower, it means being in a state of fear and fear.

Star-gazing towers can measure the world and measure the country, so how can they not speak loudly?

The Tang Dynasty was not afraid of the heavenly beings, otherwise it would not have taken ruthless actions to kill the Dragon King of Jinghe.

This is the human world, not the immortal court. Even if the gods descend to earth, they need to abide by the rules of the Tang Dynasty.

With such confidence, it would be a joke that people in heaven would be shocked.

Poetry is a good poem, but the class of poets is lower, making it difficult to see the whole picture, and the poems are biased.

A rare masterpiece, and it feels like chewing wax.

"Li Taibai?"

Zhu Yuanshi finished reading.

He looked at the signature and looked at Li Hongru with a dark face.

The other party's name and face were too different, which made him unforgettable.

The other party was wearing a student uniform in the Simen Hall.

Judging from the roughness of hands and feet, this is obviously not caused by practicing martial arts.

Although they were mixed with Yuchi Baolin, Rong Caijun and others, the other party was obviously born at a low class, and it is likely that they were only at the level of small officials and civilians, and they had to be busy with work.

Simen Pavilion recruits outstanding civilians all year round, which one is probably the best.

These civilians will continue to replenish officials below the seventh rank and act as the bottom support force of the imperial dynasty.

However, the contact between these people is limited, making it difficult to understand the top-level matters.

From the other party's perspective, this is an excellent five-character poem, which is rare.

But from their perspective, no matter how good this poem is, it can only be abandoned.

Zhu Yuanshi felt a little reluctant in his heart and took the initiative to think about it. He wanted to hear other people's opinions.

“Although it is excellent, it is difficult to use.”

The long beard and long-faced official who had previously reminded Yuchi Baolin of his identity gave a sigh of regret.

"What a pity this literary talent," another person frowned and said, "This is the best poem we have seen in the competition."

"Simple but not simple, catchy, it's a pity that I personally would like to add this poem to the top ten silver and collect it, which is considered to be a talent."

"Brother Deyan, it's just that this poem is spread among the people, but I'm afraid there's something wrong with us."

"pity!"

The digital auditor looked at each other from left to right, and couldn't help but sigh while talking in a low voice.

"Sir, is this poem worthless?"

Hearing Zhu Yuanshi called him and looking at the faces of several reviewers, Li Hongru's face gradually moved from joy to a low point.

He has copied a pretty good poem about high-rise buildings.

This is the work of the great poet Li Bai.

Li Hongru was not sure if the other party was in this world, but he had never read such poems when he was studying, so Li Bai's masterpieces could obviously be used for competition.

But Li Hongru never thought that even Li Bai's poems would fail.

He was also thinking about making some money for Li Baoguo.

"This poem is good," Zhu Yuanshi shook his head and said, "But this poem is not suitable for Star Gazing Tower."

"Do you think I said this is a dangerous building?" Li Hongru asked, "I can change the dangerous building to other words."

Li Hongru thought about his "Chicken Song". It was the first time he imitated it. He modified so much that he almost made Luo Binwang's song of goose beyond recognition.

He is not a person who follows the rules and pursues the perfection of the original poems, and changing the poems is not a big problem.

"There is no big problem for not being a dangerous building or not," Zhu Yuanshi said: "It's just a few words that don't match."

"I dare not speak loudly, for fear of shocking the heavenly people, Brother Hongru, we..."

Rong Caijun, who was standing beside him, listened for a while and finally realized something was wrong.

He pointed to the sky, then to the Star Tower and the two of them.

It is normal for normal people to fear, and it is no problem to be afraid of people from heaven, but there is no need to be afraid of the Star Gazing Tower, and the Imperial Dynasty does not need to be shocked.

No matter how good this poem is, it is not useful.

If it weren't for Yuchi Baolin beside him, Li Hongru's poem would have been thrown into the straw basket if he read it several times.

"Then I'll change it!"

Knowing the key issues, Li Hongru immediately started writing.

He made a directional mistake.

If it were in that era of literary inquisition, if the opponent caught such a handle, it would be dead.

Li Hongru couldn't help feeling a little nervous.

The environment and background are different, and even poetry has a different meaning.

He felt that he needed to be extremely careful when "learning" to avoid suffering.

His pencil made several reviewers interested.

When Li Hongru changed the word "in the sky" to "in the palace", everyone's faces suddenly became strange.

"A heroic poem by ordinary people has turned into a great poem you and me in a blink of an eye."

"The dangerous building is a hundred feet high, and you can pick the stars with your hands. You dare not speak loudly, for fear of shocking the people in the palace. When my king heard this, he was afraid that he would curse people."

"Reasonable flattery is also a skill."

When the Immortal Court was replaced by the Emperor's Dynasty, the meaning of this poem changed drastically.

Li Hongru didn't care much about it while laughing awkwardly.

A flattery is a flattery poem, which is better than being worthless.

He came here just to exchange some money and subsidize his family income, so how could he care so much?

As long as the Star Gazing Tower is paid for, he can still change it.

Carefully painted the word "in the sky" into black circles, Li Hongru suddenly felt that the evidence of his wrong direction was completely destroyed.

At this time, he stood quietly aside, waiting for the adults to speak, and how many taels of silver could he give him when he saw it.

When the auditors laughed, Li Chunfeng also attracted him.

The imperial guardian's face was very bad.

It would be fine if he could lose money and avoid disasters. Now he has not only lost money, but also suffered disasters.

Last night, I was attacked by the old dragon in Jinghe River, and the Star Gazing Tower suffered a lot of losses.

But compared to the Dragon King of Jinghe who ran into the palace to play wild, troubles in the Star Gazing Tower have a little more value.

The disaster of the Star Gazing Tower is not only the current one. Since the establishment of this tall building, it has inevitably encountered some disasters.

Some people say that the Star Gazing Tower is too high and overwhelms the palace and will inevitably suffer damage when it is overshadowed.

Some people also mentioned that the emperor's fortune was suppressed by the imperial city, and the Star Gazing Tower inherited the world, so Li Chunfeng was unable to suppress it.

But the Star Gazing Tower is not high.

Many studies must rely on this tall building and require sufficient height.

Star Gazing Tower also assumes the responsibility of reconnaissance and supervision of some areas in Chang'an.

Li Chunfeng's melancholy face almost wrinkled into a withered chrysanthemum.

Seeing that everyone was discussing easily and sweeping away the previous dullness, he couldn't help but become a little interested.

"Can you still change this flattering poem?"

When Li Chunfeng inserted, he was listening to Zhu Yuanshi's question.

"If you are not satisfied, I will change it."

In order to have a reasonable income, Li Hongru also racked his brains.

It is not easy for a scholar to make some extra reasonable money, and such scenes that require poetry are rare. Today he must get some silver and go home.

"Sure, you can change the last two sentences and let's see the effect," Zhu Yuanshi said with a smile.
To be continued...