Ji Kong was very surprised that the manuscript of Xiazhiqiu Shiyu failed to pass the review.

After all, before his identity was revealed, Shiyu Xiazhiqiu would leave it to him to check and review every time he finished writing a chapter. Except for the end of this novel, he had read all other contents.

So Ji Kong is very familiar with the quality of this novel.

Normally, there should be no problem with passing the review and publishing. And after looking at the publisher that contributed, the Buddha Chuan Library, it seems that it is not a large library with particularly strict requirements.

Could it be that the problem is at the end?

Seeing that Shiyu Xiazhiqiu was in the bathroom and had no intention of coming out for a short time, Ji Kong simply sat in front of her computer, opened the document she wrote, and dragged the progress bar directly to the end of the novel.

The ending is not long, only about 4,000 words. After reading it, Ji Kong sighed and reached out to press his forehead, not knowing what to say.

He finally knew why Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's novel was rejected.

Originally, this should be a novel that is full of joy and complaints, and the plot should also be mainly about ambiguous harems.

But at the end, the heroine suddenly had leukemia!

Then the style turned straight, from the joyful complaints at the beginning, it turned into a miserable love tragedy!

This plot is simply confused, no wonder it was rejected.

Ji Kong had also heard that the mood of the creators would affect the style of their works, but he didn't expect it to be so serious. The novel was like two people wrote it!

Ji Kong had a headache. It seemed that the mental trauma she caused to her was even greater than she thought!

"Is Sora, is it very troublesome?" Shiina Mashiba asked softly.

"Well, it's really a bit troublesome." Ji Kong scratched his head and then smiled: "But if I took action, this problem would definitely be solved!"

"Well, I believe in Sora."

"Get the comics nicely, leave this matter to me to solve."

Ji Kong touched Shiina Mahara's head again, then took a USB flash drive on his computer desk and copied Shiyu's novels from Xiazhiqiu to his computer.

He was going to modify the novel by Shiyu Kasumi and then submit it to Machida Yuanzi.

Machida Yuanko originally admired Shiyu Kamichi. If she submitted her novel by Shiyu Kamichi, it would be easy to pass, right?

"But... how to change it?"

Ji Kong put his hands on the keyboard, but he didn't know how to start writing.

His writing skills are average, and "Sword Art Online" was originally exchanged, not to mention that it is a Japanese light novel, so he has no writing experience in this area.

After thinking about it, Ji Kong simply deleted the last four thousand words and then made an open ending in a few words.

Anyway, there are 100,000 words in the first part of this novel, and even if you delete 4,000 words, it is enough for a volume.

Moreover, this is just the first volume of the novel. The open ending is also conducive to enhancing readers' expectations and the development of the next volume.

After the revision was completed, Ji Kong sent the manuscript to Machida Yuanzi in the form of an email.

Of course, he also made it clear in the email that this was a novel written by Shiyu Xiazhiqiu, and he also specifically explained that if the manuscript was reviewed, he would send the letter that passed the review to Shiyu Xiazhiqiu, instead of sending it to Shiyu.

This should bring her a big surprise, right?

Looking at Shiyu Kasuiqiu walking out of the bathroom, Ji Kong thought so.

"By the way, I have something to tell you."

It happened that the three of them were at home and had nothing to do, Ji Kong clapped his hands, focused their eyes, and said, "Tomorrow afternoon, I will attend a food conference as a judge. Well... there must be a lot of delicious food there, and I will come back later. Who of you wants to go with me?"

"I don't have to go."

Shiyu Xiazhiqiu refused without hesitation. She is still having conflicts with Ji Kong, so it is natural that she cannot go with Ji Kong.

After all, if a man and a woman appear in that kind of occasion, no matter how you look at it, they will be misunderstood as a couple.

Shiina Mabashi tilted her little head and asked softly: "Is there an ultimate annual ring cake?"

"Tsk... Didn't you still talk about the ultimate ring cake before? Why is it the ultimate now?"

Ji Kong gave a little complaint and replied, "I don't know if there is one, but it is said that there are top chefs there, so I can definitely make delicious food that is no less than the ultimate annual ring cake, right?"

"Then I'm going!" Shiina Mahara immediately raised her hand.

"Okay, let's go together tomorrow afternoon."

Ji Kong nodded. He made this invitation because he was not very confident that Shina Nashiba, but now that she can go with her, that is of course the best.

So things were decided like this. Ji Kong called his school and Shiina Mashira's school to ask for leave, and then went to the game again, and told the girls of the muse that he would not go to class tomorrow.

...

...

The next morning, Shiyu Kasumi went to school early to attend classes, and Ji Kong and Shiina Masashi took leave and slept in bed with a rare time.

But it was said that he was sleeping in. In fact, Ji Kong woke up at seven o'clock because of his biological clock. Then he lay on the bed for another hour. He had to accept the fact that he could no longer fall asleep and slowly got up from the bed.

Shiina Mahara was still lying on her small bed, her small body curled up, breathing evenly, and sleeping very sweetly.

Ji Kong didn't wake her up. After washing herself, she prepared to go out for a run and buy some breakfast to come back.

As a result, as soon as he opened the door, he saw a figure that shouldn't have appeared at the door.

"season……"

"Bang!"

Before Qiandou Isuzu could say a word, Ji Kong decisively closed the door.

"Huh-How did that guy find this place?!"

Ji Kong leaned his back against the door, his eyes still felt a little unbelievable. How did she know where she lives?

Is it tracking? This is absolutely impossible. Ji Kong is sure that he was not followed when he walked out of the castle that day.

Could it be that she had investigated her residence clearly on the day yesterday?

This is not impossible.

But the question is, isn’t there a secret force protecting herself? How could she find out the results?
Chapter completed!