Chapter 24: Composition: My Dream
Ye Fei, a Chinese teacher in Class 2, Grade 3, held a stack of test papers and felt a headache. He pressed his right hand on his temple.
Last night, Ye Fei worked overtime to correct the problem, but he still didn't finish it.
I had to take advantage of the morning study time to get off work overtime early the next morning.
Fortunately, there are not many, only the composition questions on the test paper have not been changed.
“This school time is pretty good.”
Holding a test paper, Ye Fei nodded.
"Jiang Weiweiren is smarter, writes in detail, and writes in a delicate manner. He can give him 54 points."
The composition has 60 points and 54 points, which is already a pretty good score.
"I love you in Zhang Hua's motherland, it's okay, 50 points."
"This kid Xia Hui wrote more interestingly. Alas, this kid is just a bit of a subject."
He gave Xia Hui a 53-pointer, and Ye Fei continued to correct the essay.
However, after correcting Jiang Weiwei, Xia Hui... and others' compositions, the remaining compositions of some other students gave Ye Fei a headache. What kind of composition is written? I wrote hundreds of words, but I don't know what it was. However, Ye Fei has seen a lot of this situation. Compositions have always been a difficult point in Chinese. Nowadays, there are a few good compositions for junior high school students. Not to mention junior high school students, even high school students, not many of them have good compositions.
In fact, like Jiang Weiwei, Xia Hui... Ye Fei also thinks that their compositions are too naive. But the age is there. How could a junior high school student write an essay that shocks him?
However, Ye Fei teaches these junior high school students. Even if they write poorly, they have to read them one by one.
Huh...the last one is left.
After reading dozens of essays in a row, Ye Fei felt a little tired. However, Ye Fei did not rest and had the last one.
After the correction is completed, you can post the test paper in a while, and then the content of the test paper is explained to the students.
There is not much time left before the high school entrance examination. At this moment, the review method of Dadu is either to review the previous content or the exam. After the exam, explain these test papers. Obviously, explaining the test papers is more effective and more appropriate than reviewing the previous content. Therefore, every time the high school entrance examination, the school will occasionally take a test that is not big or small.
"Huang Yifan."
The last test paper is Huang Yifan's.
Fortunately, this guy didn't get 0 points.
I couldn't help but think of the discussion between Teacher Lin and Teacher Huang last night, and Ye Fei couldn't help but smile, and felt incredible. Why did that kid get 0 points in English? You know, it's still difficult to get the English score by 0 points compared to the English score.
Fortunately, it’s not English at all, so there are not so many multiple-choice questions. In addition, there are compositions, even if he writes randomly on them, he can give points. Without much idea about Huang Yifan’s composition, Ye Fei just wants to quickly correct the last test paper.
"Hey, this essay."
Just as he was about to finish the test paper quickly, Ye Fei just read the beginning, and suddenly he was attracted by this essay.
The composition topic of this exam is an open-ended question, and there is no question, so everyone can write it casually. The composition topic of Huang Yifan is called My Dream.
The name is not very amazing, but the beginning surprises Ye Fei.
This essay is written like this:
Maybe people should have some dreams.
In my early years, I had no dreams. But when I saw others dreaming of becoming a scientist, the other dreaming of becoming a star, and the other dreaming of becoming a principal, I reflected on myself whether I should have a dream. This is entirely because I think that if someone asks me what dreams I have, if I say nothing, will it destroy the atmosphere of the conversation?
Well, in order to maintain friendship with classmates and friends, I, a person who has no dreams, also had a dream.
The beginning was very humorous, and Ye Fei was stunned just after just taking a glance.
Is this still an essay written by a junior high school student?
Keep watching, after more than ten minutes, Ye Fei was completely stunned.
If the beginning made Ye Fei’s eyes lit up or was surprised, then after reading the entire essay, Ye Fei was completely shocked by this essay.
This essay uses the humorous writing style at the beginning to quickly shift from my dream to a more serious topic to set ambition. Then, he took another allusion to propose "Always set ambition" and "Always set ambition". Finally, an extremely shocking sentence appears. People with no ambitions always set ambition, and people with ambitions always set ambition.
People with no ambition always set their goals, and people with ambition always set their goals. This is the main theme of the composition and it is also a sentence that makes people feel relieved.
What's even more incredible is that Ye Fei found that he had never seen such a classic sentence before.
Yes, don’t underestimate this sentence. With Ye Fei’s major in Chinese, he has been teaching Chinese for more than ten years. He completely believes that this sentence can definitely be compared with some classic quotes that have been passed down for thousands of years. However, Ye Fei was very surprised. Why has he never seen such a classic sentence?
Then, in the end, there is only one explanation, this classic quote is original.
However, Ye Fei was a little unbelievable.
Not to mention this classic sentence, even if it is the style of this composition, it does not look like it was written by a junior high school student.
How could a junior high school student write such a sophisticated article?
Could it be that this was copied?
He was suspicious that Ye Fei copied this essay to the search engine, but the same sentence was not found in the search engine.
Without giving up, Ye Fei also put those who have no ambitions in their search engines to make their ambitions in their search engines.
Similarly, this classic quote that Ye Fei believes has not been searched.
Seeing that the search engine could not find the content, Ye Fei was thinking.
Could it be that this essay was not copied, but was originally written by Huang Yifan?
I was extremely shocked inside, and Ye Fei read this article again.
That's right, it's indeed Huang Yifan's original work.
After reading it again, Ye Fei slapped the table and said in shock.
Although the style of this essay is extremely sophisticated, unlike what junior high school students write, but rather like what college students or even graduated from the Chinese department of college. However, the dreams, characters, and events mentioned in this essay all point to Tieshikou Middle School, which is an essay with Tieshikou Middle School as the background.
This essay may really be written by Huang Yifan.
At this moment, Ye Fei's heart was turbulent.
On the one hand, he felt that this was a little incredible.
According to common sense, it is impossible for a junior high school student to write such an article.
However, on the other side, Ye Fei was a little expectant.
Perhaps, this little guy seems to be hiding all the time?
Thinking of this, Ye Fei couldn't help but think of Huang Yifan's English score last night.
Could it be that Huang Yifan really scored a 0 mark?
Although Ye Fei does not teach English, he also knows English.
He was still joking just now that 0 points in English is harder than taking full scores in English.
Chapter completed!