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Chapter 530 "Love of Fireworks"(1/2)

Nakata Ichian breathed a sigh of relief and patiently read the submission novel in the email.

[Akimori Mountain is decadent on the streets of Shinjuku. The music of the headphones that follow the headphones is invading bit by bit in his mind. His gray eyes look at the city in front of him that is longed for by young people.

He didn't know how many people in this city were like him, and were invaded by alcohol. Suddenly, he was almost forgotten his name.

Ordinary, cowardly, useless, and even no one cares about falling on this neon street.

Money, money, money.

Now that I am so poor that I am driven out by the landlord... Is there any money to treat my mother who is suffering from a chronic disease in Hokkaido.

A sense of powerlessness arises naturally.

Qiuyue touched her pants pocket with her shriveled hands and took out a curled cigarette from it. He weakly put the bent cigarette into his mouth, took out a lighter and twisted the sparkler hard, and finally lit the only cigarette.

He looked at the flashing neon lights, gradually lost his mind, and all kinds of thoughts were swaying.]

.........

"The beginning is OK, directly describe the predicament and give the male lead pressure."

Only with pressure can there be motivation.

Classic opening technique.

I can't say anything amazing or not, but at least I won't be able to frown and read like the previous articles.

This description seems quite touching, and he has a kind of vicissitudes of being unable to succeed after coming to Tokyo to work hard.

I remember that I graduated from Waseda University with a liberal arts degree and had always wanted to regain my childhood dream, and even wanted to enter the animation industry regardless of everything.

But his half-baked skills, he studied fine arts, but he had no results after several years.

He was really hit hard by rejection letters.

At that time, he had no money and no popularity. He was floating on the streets of Tokyo alone. The only thing he could use was that he had a few coins in his pocket.

It is a pity to think about it.

The male protagonist in the book, Qiuyue Pianshan, seems to be worse than him. He has no job and his mother needs support. Everything needs money, but he has no money.

Life seems to be so dark.

Ichia Nakata, who was inspired by the past, couldn't help but recall his past self.

Alas, if you say too much, you will be tears.

He calmed down and continued to look down.

The scene is in a hotel, a woman of the same age as the male protagonist handed him a bottle of beer and said something that seemed meaningful:

["People are always confused over and over again, belittle themselves and ignite hope, but soon after, they completely lose confidence in what they do. I said, Katayama, you have been in Tokyo for eight years, so you should make a name for yourself, right?"]

......

After reading a few lines, Nakata Ichian understood.

"Is this heroine a childhood sweetheart?"

Ichia Nakada is now a middle-aged uncle, but as the editor of Kakugawa Sneaker Library's light novels, he naturally spends time traveling in various youth campus novels every day.

He dared to be sure that if it weren't for the light novel that indicated that the heroine was a childhood sweetheart at the beginning, her childhood sweetheart would definitely be a failure.

I don’t know if this is an inexplicable consensus developed by the industry.

At least you can read the light novel list all the way, and you can find that there are really many love novels with the label of "young taming".

But in the end, few of them could win.

It's strange.

Back to the topic, he still feels comfortable reading this book "Love in Fireworks".

But then, the more I looked at him, the more I frowned.

It's not that I can't stand it.

But the author's writing style is not like a newcomer or an ordinary light novel author.

It has a more...a literary flavor. The last time I read this feeling was in "Ice Fruit".

The plot is easy to understand. The male protagonist was fired and his life was in trouble. He was invited by his childhood sweetheart to drink in a bar. Although his childhood sweetheart was a moonlight clan, he sold his small apartment in Tokyo and lent money to the male protagonist.

This part of the emotional interaction is handled very delicately, and the male protagonist did not accept it casually, but struggled in his heart, and was patted by his childhood sweetheart on the back to explain the interests, which made the male protagonist accept the money he had known for more than ten years.

To be honest, he likes the description of this childhood sweetheart in the book. The other party seems to care about the male protagonist, dress up in a fashionable way, and is mingling in the bar, which is completely out of place with an honest person like the male protagonist.

She didn't look like a good character, but she took out 2 million yen without warning.

Very strange.

The male protagonist, who received this favor, did not show too much excitement on the surface, but silently raised his head and looked at the childhood sweetheart beside him. The two began to talk about the past, the childhood games and childhood experiences, and another interesting memory.

As they were talking, they raised their heads at the same time, looked at each other and stretched out their arms and fists as if they were imitating in TV series when they were childhood.

[Her eyes shine in the flickering neon lights in the bar, and I was a little confused. She was wearing the exaggerated outfit I don’t like the most in my daily life, but at this moment it didn’t affect me at all.]

When Ikara Nakata saw this, his fingertips kept scrolling the marker on the desktop.

He likes this feeling of childhood sweethearts smiling and everything he says is in his eyes.

The heroine held the wine glass in both hands, and the warm smile that looked at the bar with a hint of care was also very adorable.

It makes people wonder what kind of friend it was that he sold the small apartment he had saved for 10 years in Tokyo to support a poor friend!

Even if it's a brother, it's hard to do it.

After experiencing social baptism, Ichia Nakata no longer trusts those classmates who have borrowed money from him.

Those classmates who borrowed money, one or two of them, paid back their salaries and paid back their salaries.

As a result, it was delayed every day and I couldn't come back at all.

If you say too much, you will be tears.

The expression and eyes of this childhood sweetheart in the book when he borrowed money seemed to say, it doesn’t matter if you really can’t pay it back, what are we? Why did we come to Tokyo from the same small village, work together, sit on a street stool and eat a meal together, and weave dreams together!

Therefore, when the male protagonist silently watched the bank card after receiving the money, he could fully understand the self-evident touch.

It's great to have such a friend.

He couldn't help thinking this way.

And keep watching.

......

......

"Bang!"

Seeing the plot of the last two chapters, Ichia Nakada couldn't help it. He slapped his palm on his thighs, and the female colleague who was drinking water on the other side couldn't help but look at him.

"Nakata! Your legs are not well yet!"

"Haha, sorry, sorry, excited for a moment."

Nakada Ichian smiled and nodded to his female colleague, rubbing his thighs while sitting back in the position.

This plot, this plot is normal for him to curse people!

Others may not think it is like this.

But he can really get involved and really want to scold people!

The previous picture is pretty good, a childhood sweetheart he likes very much, but the next chapter is gone?

And the hero's spiritual pillar of hard work, the mother, also passed away before this.

Died at the Speed ​​of Light?!

The male protagonist suffered double blows one after another?

Good guy, I have never seen an author who persecuted childhood sweethearts like this.

Those who write about the bad dogs are ten thousand times kinder than this guy!

These light novel authors are really good at doing things better than the other. Maybe one day, they can even write the theme of ntr to you as pure love!

For a moment, he didn't want to watch it anymore, after all, a heroine he liked was gone.

No, since it will be gone so soon, it shouldn't be the heroine.

Alas, it’s a pity, it’s a pity.

But when I saw the miserable male protagonist who was very similar to me, Ichia Nakata felt a little embarrassed again.

I used to be so decadent, soaking in cigarettes and alcohol all day long, staring at the sky in a daze, doing nothing.

The key is that the atmosphere of this author is very good, such as the bustling city, the warm couple, passers-by who have walked by him without any concern...

He hopes that anyone will save this unlucky child now.

What a pity, no, the only childhood sweetheart who cares about him is gone.
To be continued...
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