Chapter 057
Xiao Mengyue really became the first reader of Zhao Yan's new book. Since she told Zhao Yan on Lianxun that she applied to Nanjing Hanlin College, the two of them would chat on Lianxun every day. Although they were just chatting on the Internet, Zhao Yan was already happy enough to make his boring writing every day less boring.
It is also because the two of them talk on the couplet every day that Zhao Yan wrote the outline of the new book, Xiao Mengyue knew it as soon as possible, and Zhao Yan wrote the first chapter of the new book, and Xiao Mengyue also knew it as soon as possible.
Naturally, she became the first reader of Zhao Yan's new book.
Zhao Yan sent her the first two chapters written to her on the couplet. A few minutes later, Xiao Mengyue sent a smiley expression.
Zhao Yan smiled. Although he had expected Xiao Mengyue to praise him, he still sent a sentence with anticipation.
"How is this? Is this beginning okay?"
Mengyue: "Do you want to hear the truth or the lies?"
Xiao Mengyue asked this question a bit interesting.
Yan Zaixicheng: "Tell lies first!"
Zhao Yan smiled and wanted to listen to a few nice words first.
Mengyue: "Like lies are very good!"
Inkstone is in Xicheng: "Where is the truth?"
Zhao Yan was mentally prepared. Although he was very satisfied with the beginning of this book, she seemed to have found many problems according to Xiao Mengyue's tone. Maybe she didn't think there was anything exciting about the rebirth of a master?
Meng Yue: "The truth is the creativity of this book is very novel! However, you need to practice your writing style more. Some sentences have errors in grammar, and one idiom is not appropriate. Also, there are several typos in these two chapters."
At the end of this sentence, Xiao Mengyue also gave a smirk in her mouth.
Zhao Yan's face is a little feverish and his grammar is wrong? Is there an idiom used incorrectly? There are several typos?
This is Zhao Yan's shortcomings. His grades in Chinese studies can only be considered average. In the past, this often happened when he wrote essays. Compared to him, Zhao Yan, Xiao Mengyue's academic performance has always been very good. Since she said that some of his sentences had errors in grammar, as well as problems with idioms and typos, Zhao Yan immediately believed it. No matter how thick-skinned Zhao Yan discovered this, he could not help but feel ashamed.
However, in shame, Zhao Yan's eyes turned and suddenly thought of a way to enhance the relationship between the two.
Yan Zaixicheng: "Haha, I definitely can't compare to you in the essay style! Otherwise, if I write my manuscript in the future, how about you help me modify it?"
In the villa by the riverside of Xicheng, Xiao Mengyue saw the message from Zhao Yan, smiled with her lips and two shallow dimples appear. After hesitating, she replied: "What are the benefits of me to help you modify the manuscript?"
In the attic, when Zhao Yan saw Xiao Mengyue replying, she knew that she had actually agreed.
Yan Zaixicheng: "What benefits do you want? As long as I can give you, everything is OK!"
In the villa by the river, Xiao Mengyue thought for a while and replied, "Forget it, for your sincerity, I will be very compassionate to help you modify it in the future! But you have to write it well! If you don't write it well, I won't help you modify it!"
In the attic, watching Xiao Mengyue reply, Zhao Yan felt full of joy and the smile on his face was very bright.
So, from that day on, Zhao Yan has an additional royal revisionist. Every day, Zhao Yan will send the manuscripts he wrote every day to Xiao Mengyue. Xiao Mengyue does not modify his storyline, but only helps him delete some useless nonsense and modify some grammatical errors and typos.
Although Xiao Mengyue didn’t make many changes, every time she sent the revised manuscript back, Zhao Yan found that the quality of the manuscript had improved a lot and it was much more comfortable to read.
The improvement of the quality of the manuscript is secondarily. What Zhao Yan is most happy about is that Xiao Mengyue is willing to participate in his creation. Every time he thinks of his manuscript, Xiao Mengyue is the first reader. When Zhao Yan writes, he will be much more serious. He wants Xiao Mengyue to see his talent, rather than Xiao Mengyue feels that he is not writing well after reading his manuscript.
As a result, before I knew it, the quality of Zhao Yan's new book has been greatly improved compared with the previous book "Full Moon Scimitar". At the same time, the number of words written every day is gradually increasing. Zhao Yan wants to express it in front of Xiao Mengyue! Of course, he not only wants her to see his talent, but also his efforts.
Writing as much as possible every day is also the direction of Zhao Yan's efforts.
Love is a double-edged sword. It can destroy a person or make a person become progressive. Xiao Mengyue's existence has become the source of motivation for Zhao Yan to forge ahead.
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When Zhao Yan's new book was written to nearly 50,000 words, this year's college entrance examination results came out.
Zhao Yan did not take the college entrance examination. He had already received the recommended letter from Hanlin College a few days ago. It is logical that the day when the college entrance examination results were released was meaningless to him, but in fact he was still paying attention to the college entrance examination results this time.
For example, how many points did Xiao Mengyue get? Can she successfully enter Hanlin Academy?
How many points did Lou Wenhao get? Did Lin Langtian copy the answer for him during the college entrance examination wrong? Can he go to a good university?
How did the class and other students in the school take the exam? Zhao Yan is also curious.
Yan Zaixicheng: "I heard that the college entrance examination results have come out!"
Zhao Yan sent Xiao Mengyue this sentence on the couplet news, and he believed that Xiao Mengyue knew the purpose of his words.
Maybe Xiao Mengyue was not next to the computer. It took almost half an hour before Xiao Mengyue replied.
Mengyue: "Yeah, I'm out!"
There was a smile at the end of Xiao Mengyue's reply. Seeing this expression, Zhao Yan felt at ease. It seemed that Xiao Mengyue's score was not a problem at Hanlin Academy. Before today, Zhao Yan was also confident about Xiao Mengyue's grades, but there were always accidents in the college entrance examination. Every year, there were a few students who had good academic performance but had abnormal performance in the college entrance examination. Zhao Yan has been a little worried about Xiao Mengyue's performance in the college entrance examination this time in recent days.
Yan Zaixicheng: "How many points do you get? Is it okay to go to Hanlin College?"
Although Zhao Yan guessed it in his heart, he still wanted to see Xiao Mengyue give him the exact reply.
In the villa by the river, Xiao Mengyue smiled and replied: "416 points, don't worry! There is no problem going to Hanlin Academy."
416 points seem to be not much, but in fact it is already a perfect high score! Because of the Ming Dynasty’s college entrance examination system, most candidates only need to take two or three courses. Although the total score of Chinese studies alone is 300, it is still extremely difficult to get more than 400 points in two or three courses.
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Not only did Xiao Mengyue get good news, but Zhao Yan called Lou Wenhao to ask about it, but he also heard the good news he wanted to hear.
"A Yan! I got 307 points in the exam! Haha! I got 307 points in the exam! My first choice should be accepted! Although we can't be in the same university in the future, we are both in Nanjing. How about it? Is this news good? Let's report it together then!"
Lou Wenhao was very excited on the phone. When he was filling out the college entrance examination application, he knew that the university where Zhao Yan was admitted to was in Nanjing, so he also filled out a university in Nanjing to make his first choice. He had no hope. Unexpectedly, during the college entrance examination, Lin Langtian, a top student in Class 1, sat in front of him and reached a deal with him to copy the Chinese studies exam paper.
A total score of 300 for Chinese studies is 300. This course alone brings more than 200 points to Lou Wenhao. Lou Wenhao's first choice is Nanjing Business School. The total score of 307 should be sure to get to Nanjing Business School.
Zhao Yan was naturally happy for him.
However, the good news Zhao Yan heard was only that. Fan Long and Ji Yichun's college entrance examination results were not unexpected. Fan Long only scored 114 points, and Ji Yichun was even lower, with only 93 points. When Zhao Yan called them respectively, Fan Long had already said on the phone that he was about to go out to work, and his tone was a little sad, and he was a little envious of Zhao Yan and Lou Wenhao, especially Lou Wenhao.
Ji Yichun's tone on the phone was still so heartless and careless, and he didn't care about his college entrance examination results, but there was a sentence he said on the phone that made Zhao Yan laugh.
Ji Yichun said casually on the phone: "My old man heard that I only scored 93 points, so he asked me if I was mentally retarded?"
Chapter completed!