Entering a new volume, the feedback is not good. After thinking about it, I have some conclusions.

The education strictly follows the outline, the main plot has not deviated, and the context is very clear, so there is no problem in this regard.

The reason is

First, some readers do not like different ball plots.

This book has more than three million words, which is basically what happened on Earth. However, starting from this volume, the protagonist enters a different ball and the environment changes.

The switching on the map and the changes in the environment have caused some friends to not adapt. Moreover, the plot entry point is not very good. We should not start from the "flat push" atmosphere of the northern three provinces. We should directly enter those powerful and uninvested areas to enrich alien species, and while laying out all the foreshadowings that should be found in the world.

After Pi Shen accidentally entered the alien ball, he maintained a strong posture as always. With the upgrading of star skills, these are inevitable products. Therefore, when he saw Xiao Pi still ruining the world in the alien ball, some book friends may feel a sense of gap in their hearts, and they feel that the imagined setbacks have not come. Shouldn't the alien ball be like this? Then again, the alien ball is indeed terrible, but it also depends on who is coming...

Jiang Xiao is obviously the kind of person who is a top student wherever he is placed. He is different from the second-ranked pseudo-school master in the high school class in the small county town. He is a top student in the high school in the small county town, and also a top student in the Imperial Capital University...

Second, perhaps it is because in the previous chapters, they focused on improving star skills within a few days. Some readers do not like chapters that upgrade the quality of star skills. After all, most of the qualitative changes of star skills are in the quality of "platinum" and "diamonds". To improve the quality of Candle Moon, there is no qualitative change, only quantitative change.

This is easy to change, after all... Most of the star skills have graduated~

Third, Yu has always tried to maintain his style and try to write as relaxed and joyful as possible. He thought that everyone should feel relaxed and happy when watching, and read the pastime, but some readers are not very satisfied.

There should be no problem with the protagonist's skin. Book friends just watched Xiao Du Mi's skin all the way. After all, this is the only "main line" of the book. Those who don't want to read it will only curse a few words, and they have already left, and Yu has long been used to it.

So, it must be a problem with the companion.

The character of Blind Girl is not likable, and it can be seen from the data of the refill on the page. It might be better if Jiang Xiao’s teammates were replaced by Erwei or Xia Yan at this time.

This is how you write online articles. Book friends provide real-time feedback and the author improves in real-time. For the above summary issues, Yuhui will work hard to correct them.

This book has written 3.65 million words so far, and the book has long entered the late stage. You must not "lose your festival when you are old". You will focus more on your attention, tighten your strings, stick to it, write it well, and strive to improve the quality of your articles and close the end of your book on the basis of ensuring that your style remains unchanged.

As for books, there are climaxes and lows, and there are stimulation and dullness.

Uh...why? You will adjust it as soon as possible. Thanks to the book friends who still stayed with you during the trough period (scratching your head)

?(′???`) Refill core

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Chapter completed!