Some readers said that they were too well written, but later they focused on asking questions at the end of the chapter and received a reply, so I borrowed this to reply and give an explanation for myself.

1. The atmosphere of life is too strong, there are too few battles, and the plot of the battle ends too quickly

This is a problem that does exist, and I am trying to intersperse as much as possible. However, the focus of this novel is actually to have more battles in mental power and pattern. Of course, there are arrangements for single-person and even team battles, but the fact that the protagonist has a higher combat power with the people around him is indeed my negligence. It is difficult to deal with in a short period of time. I hope to make up for it after the subsequent war begins.

2. Too many conversations, too many psychology, and not obvious plot promotion

Compared to writing a straightforward account, I think the form of dialogue is more appropriate. For example, if the first half of the chapter "Accounting in the tavern" is not used to add interest to the tone of passers-by, it will become a long and simple narrative, which may be more boring. In this way, the character's personality can be reflected with details such as language and actions. In fact, there are very few psychological descriptions, so I don't know where this is too much, and I also hope to point it out in detail. In my opinion, psychology and dialogue not only serve the plot, but also serve the characters and details. The information interspersed in the dialogue may not be obvious, but there will always be no more nonsense.

3. Want to see what she did every year, briefly explain what she was feeling after doing it, and then devote herself to the next plot, don’t write about why she did this

Regarding this issue, I am afraid that I cannot modify it. Without cause and effect, it will not be able to reflect the logic of the plot. There will be no rationality in the later situation. The game world I virtually created is a very small world, and the feedback on the butterfly effect is extremely obvious. Therefore, the behavior of the characters is likely to have an impact. If the cause is not handled well, the consequences will probably be too abrupt. As for simply explaining the mood, it is even more impossible. I don’t write a record of the story. The mood of the characters can be reflected in the behavior, and it can also make the readers feel that as an author, I will not label the characters in my writing.

4. These people always appear

There seem to be a lot of new characters appearing recently, and there will be more in the future. The protagonist is Nian Nian, and Nian Nian is always around them. If I feel bored, then I can do nothing.

5. Artificial intelligence is too involved. It is good to be a simple game. The protagonist is data and can be used as the protagonist's halo.

I am not simply writing a game, especially the kind of games that complete tasks and get rewards one by one. I am indeed writing about artificial intelligence. The protagonist is not data. Despite the different forms, she is still an independent person with emotions, emotions and past and future. This is not her protagonist halo. Her "protagonist halo" actually lies more in her interpersonal relationships.

6. The skill is not available without a point of system origin

There is no need for this kind of skill every year, and other characters do not have this possibility.

7. A person like Nick can write about his life and death from various dangerous places to obtain various skills books, etc.

Nick would not do this. No part of his character would push him to do such things. Even if he had an excessive desire to protect every day, he would throw these things into the recycling bin disdain.

——Travel

The author is mostly a bit stubborn, especially when it comes to the character description. Although I always carefully determine many details and strive to make the story more tortuous, unfortunately, the characters in the story always ignore the plot I prepared in advance and act without authorization, adding a lot of plots for no reason, just like Nick will wait for every year to come home at night and will tell Nick about his thoughts every year.
Chapter completed!