Chapter 17: Good poetry must be used on the edge of the knife(1/2)
"Hey, that's OK."
"After all, West Lake looks better in mid-June than before."
"But it's average."
"Actually, it's OK, it's appropriate. Look, June, West Lake, isn't it written about now?"
After all, it's the first sentence.
Many netizens did not feel how powerful this poem is.
But Chen Fan didn't explain, looked ahead, and then slowly spoke again: "The scenery is not the same as the four seasons."
"It feels like it's a bit poetic."
"The second sentence is rhyming."
"Yeah, it's easy to read, much better than the previous poems."
but.
Although it is much better than the poems that talk about Water Margin before, I can't tell anything in two sentences.
At least.
This is much worse than the eternal quatrains that many people have read since childhood.
But Chen Fan still smiled slightly, then looked at the lotus leaves in front of him: "The lotus leaves are endless and green."
"My grass..."
"This is this..."
"Why do I feel like this sentence is awesome?"
If the first and second sentences are nothing.
So.
As soon as the third sentence was released, it scared the netizens in the live broadcast room.
After all, [West Lake in mid-June, the scenery is not the same as the four seasons], this just tells you that the West Lake in June is different from the West Lake in other seasons.
Although it's OK to read, I don't think anything.
So.
What is the scenery of West Lake in June?
So the third sentence appears.
What is the third sentence?
It's talking about lotus leaves.
right.
That is the lotus leaves in front of the broken bridge.
You ask if the poem is not about lotus leaves, how come they become lotus leaves?
In fact, lotus leaves are lotus leaves, and lotus leaves are lotus leaves. It just has a different name.
But that's not the point.
The point is.
Chen Fan’s description of the lotus leaves in front of him.
The lotus leaves are endless and green.
The lotus leaves seem to reach the sky, and what we see is endless turquoise green.
But this is not over yet.
There is also the fourth sentence.
Looking at the lotus flowers blooming in the lotus leaves, Chen Fan thought: "The lotus flowers are red in the sun."
The fourth sentence comes out.
The entire live broadcast room seemed to be stunned for a few seconds.
After all, in mid-June, the scenery in West Lake is not the same as the four seasons.
The lotus leaves are endless and green, and the lotus flowers are red in the sun.
Until a while, the information in the sky came.
"Damn it, anchor, I was wrong."
"Anchor, it turns out that you really know how to write poetry."
"The anchor not only knows how to write poetry, but also makes the poems so exciting."
"Ahhhhh...please take my knees."
I remembered that a group of Net Dragons had previously teased Chen Fan's poems as if they were likable.
But unexpectedly.
This slap in the face came so quickly.
certainly.
If Chen Fan wrote a poem just average, or it was better than before, that would be fine.
But the problem is.
The poem written by Chen Fan just now is nothing but ordinary, and is just better than before.
This can be called a famous quote from all ages.
It can even be said.
There are many poems about West Lake, but there are very few poems about West Lake well written.
And Chen Fan's song.
No exaggeration, it is more classic than any West Lake poem they have ever heard.
Think about it again.
June, West Lake, lotus leaves, lotus flowers... This was originally just a very ordinary scene in the eyes of many netizens.
But.
In Chen Fan's poem, it seems extremely charming.
What's even more rare is.
This poem is written specifically for West Lake...it even seems to be just written by the anchor.
"After all, in the middle of June, the scenery in West Lake is not the same as the four seasons, so it is well written."
"Well. I felt that the first and second sentences didn't have much flavor, but now when I look back, I find that the first and second sentences are also extremely classics."
"I also think that the word "after all" in the first sentence is very well used. After all, it is June of West Lake... After this poem, I think that West Lake in June will be the most beautiful West Lake."
"Please take my knees away, too."
Everyone worships the entire live broadcast room.
However, Chen Fan said, "Everyone, everyone, I don't need to worship you. What, what about the Rockets."
Chen Fan was no exception to everyone's performance.
This poem is a masterpiece by Yang Wanli in his previous life. Even if it is included in the West Lake poems in his previous life, it is one of the best.
"Puff... Damn, do you have any image of a poet? I still think of Rockets."
"Anchor, don't tell me, you write poetry just for money."
"Otherwise... Brother Fan is a financial fan, do you know? However, I think Brother Fan has written this poem long ago, waiting for us to smash the rocket before he could get it out."
"I'm going, I'm fooled by the Japanese... But Brother Fan, for this poem, even if you cheat us, we're willing."
“Will +1…”
Then.
Rockets after rockets took off:
[Heart turns into ashes] Reward a Rocket...
【Tianyuan】Reward a Rocket...
[Ideal 30-year-old on the way] Reward a Rocket...
【Yun Yu】Reward a Rocket...
【Happy Icefield】Reward a rocket...
[Lin Mosheng] Reward a Rocket...
To be continued...