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Later, Zhang Tan realized that the punishment for Xiaobai to fight this time was that she was not allowed to watch TV. For others, if you don’t watch TV, you just don’t watch it for one night, but for Xiaobai, it was simply a loss of life, she was completely depressed and listless.

"This is the script you wrote yesterday, distributed randomly, anonymously, each of you, comment, and we will hold a meeting to discuss it in an hour."

The deputy team leader randomly distributed 10 scripts from yesterday, and each person received one, because they had no name and didn't know whose it was.

Zhang Tan also got one and looked it down. An hour later, everyone gathered in the conference room. In addition to the two deputy team leaders, the team leader also came.

When everyone was there, the group leader Liu directly called out: "Zhang Tan, let's talk about the script you have in hand first. Let's talk about the advantages and disadvantages, and everyone listen carefully."

Zhang Tan closed the script and placed it on the conference table in front of him.

"The advantages and disadvantages of my script are obvious. There are three advantages: one is that the language is lively and cute, which is very suitable for the plot needs... There are three disadvantages: the plot lacks logic. For example, at the beginning, Xiaoxiao Ni is very poor and fantasizes that he can win the grand prize, but he really wins... The driving force of the story cannot come from pure coincidence..."

Everyone in the conference room was listening carefully, and a girl sitting on Zhang Tan's right looked a bit special.

"The second is that there is a plot that said Xiao Xiaoni and his friends were going to make a youth film, and then they spent a lot of space to write the plot of the youth film. The audience watched the play, but the characters in the cartoon were also acting. This is a play in the play, which is very unsuitable..."

...

After Zhang Tan finished speaking, the team leader asked, "What are your ways to modify these three questions?"

Zhang Tan paused for a moment, and he didn't say anything about modifications before, but he only said comments, but he was confident and calmly said: "For the first question, that is, pure coincidence, you can turn the small-small winning prize into a background setting, that is, he won the prize when he appears, and then he will develop the story around how to spend money, so that it will be avoided..."

After Zhang Tan finished speaking, Old Liu nodded repeatedly, said it was very good, and then asked: "Who wrote this? Take the initiative to raise your hand."

Everyone looked left and right, and a sound rang out from Zhang Tan's right hand.

"It's me."

The team leader smiled and said, "I guess it's probably you, Jiang Rong, what do you think of Zhang Tan's comments?"

Jiang Rong: "I've said it very well, I accept it all, thank you, I'm learning."

...

After get off work, Zhang Tan received a call from Aunt Huang, saying that Xiaomi had already answered it and was in a stable mood, so she didn't cry or make a fuss.

Zhang Tan did not go home immediately. There was a dinner party tonight. He and He Chao were welcomed to join. The person who proposed was the group leader Lao Liu, and all 15 people from the evaluation team participated.

Zhang Tan is one of the protagonists and he can't help drinking. Fortunately, he has a good alcohol tolerance. He Chao is not good enough. He is 70% drunk and has a big tongue.

Jiang Rong toasted Zhang Tan and said that her comments today benefited a lot.

When the group leader Liu was drinking with Zhang Tan, he encouraged him to be patient, to be arrogant and impatient, and to wait for opportunities.

Among these newcomers, he is most optimistic about Zhang Tan.

The restaurant owner pushed the door open and handed the business card with a smile. Welcome to come again next time.

Jiang Rong said: "It's good to eat, but it's too far away. Does the boss have a branch?"

The boss said: "Yeyeyouyouyou, there are three branches, one on West Chang'an Street..."

Jiang Rong praised the boss for his big business, and several branches are open in prosperous areas. The rent for a month is amazing and he also needs to make money, which shows that the business must be very good.

The boss said: "The rent is expensive, especially West Chang'an Street!"

Everyone laughed and said that the rent on West Chang'an Street is expensive, but the business is good, so maybe it is the most profitable among several branches.

The speaker was unintentional, and the listener was intentional, and Zhang Tan's mind moved.

After dinner, everyone parted ways.

When Zhang Tan returned to the school, the guard Lao Li saw him come back and stretched out his head from the booth to say hello.

"Mr. Zhang is back, oh, I'm drinking."

Zhang sighed it, but didn't smell it, and asked, "Is the wine smell very strong?"

Lao Li said: "Some."

Zhang Tan originally wanted to go to the classroom to see Xiaomi who came back today. Hearing this, he gave up his thoughts, went upstairs, returned to his room, went into the bathroom to take a shower, and when he came out, he heard a knock on the door.

"Wait for a moment."

He changed his clothes, wiped off the water droplets from his hair, walked to the door, opened the door, no one, looked down, how could there be no one! Two children stood in front of him with their little heads raised, one looked at him with a timid expression, and the other was terrified, as if they were going to fight.

The one who is Huhu is wearing a red Great China and has a band sticker on her face, which is the little white children's shoes that are incompatible with him.

This looks a bit like a scarred person.

Why, the chase came to the house? Doesn’t this break the rules of the game? It won’t harm your family.

The other one looks familiar, but can't remember it. It feels that most of the children look similar, either like a douzi or a carrot head.

When Scarp's Cute Tu Xiaobai Children's Shoes saw him, she still pursed her lips, looking very serious, and her big eyes swayed, showing that she was quite uneasy.

Zhang Tan saw that the two little girls coming to the door did not speak, so he took the lead in breaking the silence and asked:

"Hello, what's wrong? Is there anything wrong with me?"

The timid child lowered his head, fiddled with his little clothes, took a step to the left, and hid behind Xiaobai, hiding himself.

Xiaobai glanced at Zhang Tan, as if it was very hot, and his eyes quickly moved away, and finally looked at a certain floor in the corridor where a flower might be seen.

"What's wrong? Please talk." Zhang Tan asked again.

"Uncle, I'm sorry, hohoho~~~" Xiaobai didn't even look at him, but she was indeed what she said.

ah?

Zhang Tan looked at her in surprise, what did you say just now? Sorry? Is "kill you" pronunciation of "sorry" in Sichuan dialect?

"Does your hands still hurt? Sorry, I didn't bite you on purpose."

Xiaobai finally plucked up the courage, raised his head, looked at him, moved down, stared at his hand, the gauze had been removed, and the band sticker was the same as on her face.

Zhang Tan was sure this time that Xiaobai Children's Shoes came to apologize, not to speak harshly.

So……

Zhang Tan looked at the other little girl Xiaobai was holding. She was as tall as Xiaobai, thin and small, with a little swollen eyes. She seemed to have just cried.

If you guess correctly, this should be Xiaomi.

Sure enough, Xiaobai pulled Xiaomi to introduce to him: "Xiaomier is back, thank you Uncle Thia."

He said to Xiaomi, who was lowering his head, "Muwazi, what are you afraid of? Just instigate me."
Chapter completed!