At first glance, this name is quite unfamiliar.

But I vaguely feel like I’ve heard this name somewhere before.

He continued to read the content.

"Wu Qianli is a soldier, a very pure soldier. He is rough and literate, but not much. He has a stubborn temper..."

Seeing this description, Xu Xin nodded slightly.

He liked this style of writing very much.

There is no need for too many gorgeous words, just hit the topic directly, and the image of a character can be erected in just ten or twenty words.

I glanced at the document subconsciously.

6231 words.

I said to myself, my dear, there are not even one chapter of the online novel that has too many words.

At this moment, his cell phone dinged.

He picked it up and saw that someone had added it.

[Lan Xiaolong]: Hello, Director Xu, I am Lan Xiaolong.

Xu Xin passed directly, took the initiative to send an emoticon to say hello, and said:

"Teacher Lan, I am reading your story. We will communicate in a moment."

No matter what Lan Xiaolong's qualifications are, the introducer is Duan Yihong, and this alone has to give him face.

"OK."

The other party also responded very quickly.

Then, the two stopped communicating.

Xu Xin lit a cigarette and began to read the story quietly.

He actually read very quickly, and it only took him about ten minutes to read the whole story for the first time.

but……

War stories from the period of resisting U.S. aggression and aiding Korea?

He directly searched "Changjin Lake" on Baidu, and then Baidu again.

When I saw the sentence [Forcing the US Army's ace troops to undergo the "longest retreat in history"], my eyes moved.

I read the general summary about this battle using the encyclopedia, and then combined this story in my mind.

Then he nodded secretly.

This story is not bad.

This is the evaluation he gave.

But how interested is he?

Not really.

First of all, this story has a main theme, and since it is a main theme, there is a set of unwritten and hidden rules in the film and television industry.

For example, the image must be positive, it must reflect the strength of our army, etc.

Nowadays, many anti-Japanese dramas actually "amplify" this unwritten rule, but the scale is not good, so they come up with such things as "taking a grenade out of the crotch" and "killing someone eight hundred miles away with one shot."

Famous scenes such as "killing the Japanese".

He does not resist the main theme, after all, this is also a credit.

but……

He is a director, and when he wants to make a movie, he not only needs to read the story, but also the script. He needs to understand the screenwriter's ideas and thinking from it, and then combine it with his own ideas to see if he can create the kind of story that makes him excited.

spark.

But now this story is too thin.

It's like a running account. Cause, process, and ending.

But it didn't make people feel very moved.

It can only be said that after learning about the "Battle of Changjin Lake"... Just looking at the encyclopedia, he can feel how "cute" the cutest people back then were, and he felt that this was a very good article.

A good running account.

The writing is concise and sophisticated.

The story is also interesting enough.

But when it comes to making a movie...he hasn't seen the script yet, so it's hard to say anything yet.

After sitting in front of the computer and thinking for a while, he opened Yang Mi's QQ and wrote on it:

"Teacher Lan, I have finished reading the story and have an overview of "The Battle of Changjin Lake". My evaluation is that the story is very good, but whether it can be made into a movie requires you to construct the script. At present,

, if it were shot purely from the perspective of Wu Qianli, not much can be extended, and it would be a very monotonous movie.

If possible, I hope you can highlight several supporting characters when constructing the script, not just the villains of the US military, but also some... "people" who can make ordinary people more emotional.

Moreover, since it is from the perspective of Wu Qianli, I hope to go in the direction of "roughness and fineness". Don't deliberately sensationalize. You can refer to "blank space" when writing the script and only write out the positive characters.

Heroic, leaving other blank spaces to the director to express.

The overall story is very complete and respects historical facts. However, I think you need to pay attention to your intention when you first draft the script. Do you want to describe a big scene or a "corner of war"?

I think you need to weigh the proportions of these two points in the story structure to prevent the script from putting the cart before the horse and losing "Five Thousand Miles" and still "Changjin Lake" after the script is created, which would be inappropriate.

The above are my thoughts for your reference.”

After writing it, I sent it directly to Yang Mi.

Then he switched to QQ on his mobile phone, copied the message he sent to his wife, and sent it to Lan Xiaolong.

This way you don’t need a computer to log in to WeChat, and you don’t have to scan the QR code.

Very troublesome.

At this time.

"Didi."

My wife’s QQ replied “?”.

Xu Xin didn't even bother to respond.

After sending it to Lan Xiaolong, he put the story in the "Not bad" folder on his desktop.

A conservative estimate is that there are at least thirty or forty such stories there.

Most of the time, friends came to ask him to take a look.

Usually he would not refuse such a request, but he would rarely say anything like "This story is good, let me film it?"

After finishing the story, he continued busy with his own affairs.

Until Lan Xiaolong replied.

"Okay, thank you, Director Xu. This story is still in the initial stage. I think there are still many places to be extended and modified. Moreover, there are still a lot of historical facts that need to be verified and investigated. After I finish the first version of the script, I will

Would you like to send Director Xu to take a look?"

After seeing this message, Xu Xin replied:

"Ok, no problem."

"Please guide me."

"You're welcome."

This is the end of the chat.

Xu Xin put down his phone, looked at the script of "Breaking Silence" in front of him, and suddenly returned to the computer desktop.

Created a new folder: [Main Theme]

Then the story of "Changjin Lake" was moved out and renamed "Changjin Lake--Lan Xiaolong".

I moved the manuscript directly to the [Main Theme] folder.

The main melody is not mandatory, but... there are always some special years that need to be used.

This chapter is not over, please click on the next page to continue reading! This story is not bad, you can consider it if you need it.

After finishing all this, he continued his ordinary morning.

In the afternoon, Wang Sicong presented the ring.

Not with Di Wei.

Xu Xin was delighted:

"What happened? Did you break up?"
To be continued...