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Yesterday, the editor said that Sanjiang failed and will be launched on the shelves this Friday.
Although it was a bit regrettable, it was better for me to reach the current level as the first original book of transformation. I had planned to end it.
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Regarding the plot, first of all, the path of no heroine or woman is firm, and then the second world is a bit long, because this is the stage when the protagonist lays the foundation of the Tao. If the protagonist is an ordinary Heaven Infinite, he will practice whatever he gets, which is a bit incongruous.
I practice Buddhism, demons, and Taoism. Before that stage, I should be good at it. At the beginning, I must specialize in one subject and learn from others' strengths. Of course, this is just my personal philosophy.
I designed this book about a dozen worlds, and there are several worlds that are basically detailed so that they are almost equivalent to an original book. The plot of hundreds of thousands of words is probably the protagonist in a relatively important stage of cultivation.
Some classmates said that the overall situation is very plain, and there is no way to do this. I found that there is a choice between logic and plot conflict. In addition, my level is really not enough, and I can't control it if I add too many things.
For example, with the female lead, as soon as I enter the emotional field, my level will drop sharply. Playing with my strengths and avoiding my weaknesses is the rational choice.
There is also a scientific immortal cultivation with a lot of imagination. I once read a cyber-based cultivation book, which has a lot of inspiration. It depends on the situation or not. I personally think it is a bit inconsistent with the overall style of the book.
As I wrote this book, I also summarized a lot of experience. First of all, the setting was too complicated, which raised unnecessary reading thresholds and increased the memory burden of readers.
Secondly, the problem of character image is that I always feel that I can’t write a flesh-and-blood character in my life. The author’s experience is really insufficient and I have read too few classic works.
That kind of moving character also requires space to lay the groundwork. In terms of the fast pace of online articles, it is really difficult to grasp, and it may make readers feel "embarrassing" or "water".
Finally I opened a group and I could come if I wanted to come.
Chapter completed!