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Summary of the end of the volume
Author: baka Mengyun
Summary of the end of the volume
Hello, readers, this is Mengyun. Thank you very much for reading my book.
The Harry Potter world has come to an end. Although there are many twists and turns in the middle and many places in Caven, I finally stumbled to finish writing this copy.
How to say it, I can probably give myself a score of 70, let me explain it bit by bit.
First, it is the question of the choice of this world. In this regard, I chose "Harry Potter and the Cursed Child" as the plot's original version and adopted the world line after Delphine's victory. This is also part of the origin of "The Wind Rises" in this volume. After all, just like Voldemort said at the end, the wind corresponds to time, and there is such a metaphor.
The second metaphor is that Yang Yun himself represents this storm of change. Chu Xuan has suggested it many times, and as a wise man in the Zhongzhou team, he has completed his own layout independently for the first time.
The result was gratifying. Qi Tengyi and Zero Point did not die, and did not leave more regrets like Na Wu.
However, the problem is that "Harry Potter and the Cursed Child" exists in the form of a stage play and has not been made into a movie. Its popularity is not as good as that of Fantastic Beasts. Moreover, its characters also have many OOC and plot flaws, which has led to the vast majority of readers not seeing this work.
There is nothing I can do about this. Who asked me to choose this world? I have to finish writing with tears in my eyes.
Actually, I initially wanted to write a story about time travel and plot changes. When I chose Harry Potter as the blueprint, I wanted to write a worldview similar to the Goburg Stranger. Voldemort occupied Hogwarts, and Dumbledore was forced to escape... But as I wrote, I found that the worldview seemed more suitable to be a single book, so I finally formed what I am now.
Maybe it would be better to write that way, but who knows that kind of thing?
Second, it is the plot arrangement problem. This volume is about 200,000 words, which is almost comparable to the sum of the previous four volumes... Of course, as a completely changed new world, it needs to be connected with the past and the future, laying enough foreshadowing to prepare for the future return, I personally think this kind of space is acceptable.
The problem is that I stuffed too many elements into this volume.
Zheng Zha, Zhang Jie and Yang Yun’s triangular werewolf killing, the question of “who is the real guide”; the team battle with the Inzhou team allows the members of the Zhongzhou team to play out so as not to become soy sauce; and the question of the plot characters arranging scenes, portraying and laying the groundwork…
I used the practice of team description, and wrote the story on one side before writing the other side, but this writing method may not be loved by many people.
I try my best to describe the personality traits of all the characters who appear and what they will do under the current situation. In fact, I think the characters I have written are not OOC, but this way I have to spend more writing... Perhaps the details are appropriate, which is also a part of what I should learn.
Third, regarding the question of Zheng Zha's fight for too long, I personally am not satisfied with the fight scene, so I have changed it seven or eight times, and the longer I write it, the longer it has been written, and about one-third of the length... I want to add some details to make the battle scene more exciting.
But at present, many people don’t seem to like it, so I will make adjustments next to bring readers a better reading experience.
Perhaps the environment is not ten years ago, I actually buried a lot of foreshadowing in Volume 5, and the biggest foreshadowing is the butterfly flapping its wings, the strong wind blows... As for now, I haven't seen the readers see it yet.
Then, leave the suspense to the plot of the next return.
Finally, I would like to say a little nonsense. I know that the beginning chapter is very persuasive, and I also know that the settings on the front and back are outdated, but these things are not useless.
Please give me some advice on how I can write different new ideas on this "outdated" setting.
Please look forward to the next volume, "Borrowing the Power in the Sky".
Chapter completed!