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Wonderful comments on the wind and water of the official road 2

This is the first time I have read this kind of "official road" article. The beginning is very attractive! I am very attentive... I read some of it and feel it. The atmosphere of a small countryside, and the part where the police station dispatched to arrest people. They are all written very realistically, with a strong sense of substitution and very good-looking! Come on! Continue to support you!

Posted by: Dingdang

Isn't this an urban article? What happened to Ergouzi's wound after being shot? It's magical and healed? It's still fantasy... The key is that you don't have a fantasy point in the whole article. After all, you make such a pit, how can you bury it to death? I'm so depressed that I'm not going to be fantasy, or we're just a city, you...

Posted by: Dingdang

I'm following the author's footsteps again! There's a question. Can the police station take a irrelevant person with him when arresting criminals? And it's a little disagreeable. However, the story is written by the author and it feels a bit intertwined. I also suspect that the male protagonist took the official path because he participated in this operation! Come on!

Posted by: Dingdang

An honest farmer, without much education, and even expelled him to school... With this setting, the male protagonist can still become an official~ suspense! Looking forward... I really want to know if the male protagonist has such a simple mind, under the pressure of society, will it become complicated and start to intrigue? Is the male protagonist who becomes an official mediocre? The more he talks, the more he looks forward to it...

Posted by: Killing a pig only takes one knife

The Ergou's mother called her child so creatively! "Son, my dog..." Haha, is this calling her son or a dog? But Wan Ergou woke up too quickly after being shot, right? If the author said that being shot one millimeter from the heart, it would be a life-threatening life. Because there are large blood vessels near the heart, one millimeter from the heart, it may hurt the mucous membrane of the heart. Well, even if it's okay, I woke up the next day, too fast! Although it's a novel, we will follow the facts. Haha, after all, you are urban literature, not fantasy...

Posted by: Killing a pig only takes one knife

Haha, I found that there are quite a lot of funny things in the author's article! But this Wan Ergou is so good at kung fu! I guess it was because he shot Director Zhang that he had taken Guanlu from now on, right? Right?

Posted by: Devouring the Years

Actually, when I saw the author write about Ergou Beipeng as an assistant police officer, I was a little puzzled. He was a junior high school student, so let’s not talk about diplomas for now. Even this age is 100% impossible! The novel requires yy, but it cannot be y-aged. Have the author ever seen a child in his 14th and 5th century be a policeman? Do you want the government to destroy all the cadres in their village? Then there is the personality of the male protagonist. When he saw the principal being ill-treated to the teacher, he said: "I have stolen you." In an instant, I felt that the male protagonist's personality should not be like this. The previous article has always written about the heroic spirit of the male protagonist, but why does his tone look so similar to the underworld?

Posted by: Devouring the Years

I read the author's article for the first time. I wanted to read a few chapters, so I'll read it tomorrow. But... the author is so smart, and there is a suspense at the end of each chapter, which forces me to keep reading... At the beginning of the story, the male protagonist was fired helplessly because of "the senior official and senior level crushing people to death". It's really unfair! But it also laid the foreshadowing for the subsequent text! Come on! Keep reading tomorrow!

rt, keep spreading ~~

Posted by: Yunying Muhua

Dada’s update today is so powerful. The smooth plot and delicate descriptions make each character look so vivid and realistic. Dada’s writing style is getting better and better. I am watching Dada’s updates every day. Xiaoguang witnessed Dada’s growth with his own eyes. With Dada’s continuous progress, Xiaoguang also enjoys more and more fulfilling satisfaction. Reading Dada’s novels is becoming more and more enjoyable. I hope that the author will continue to work hard to make continuous progress in the future! Xiaoguang is looking forward to Dada’s ability to write a better novel!

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