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Chapter 1534 Script Forum(2/2)

Is the story of "Accident" exciting?

Obviously, it is much more exciting than "The Lottery". Although this movie has some shortcomings, it is a highly completed work after all.

Therefore, when the synopsis of the script was sent to everyone, everyone couldn't wait to start reading it.

In fact, Li Yi also has selfish motives. The so-called Three Stooges are better than Zhuge Liang. To be honest, for Li Yi, he thinks this script has many problems.

But he can't give an answer at once on how to make rectifications, so asking these young screenwriters and letting everyone criticize them would kill two birds with one stone, wouldn't it?

Everyone started watching it, including other screenwriters, filmmakers, and investors who came to the scene.

When the name "Accident" appears in everyone's eyes, it instantly makes people feel that it is at least better than the previous script name "Insurance Fraud".

Of course, it may also be because they automatically put on filters.

Soon, the scene became quiet, and Lin Junfeng also looked at it seriously.

He had to admit that Li Yi was Li Yi. Although the story of "Accident" was not perfect, it was obviously much more interesting than his story.

After Li Yi took a few sips of water and saw that everyone had closed the script, he smiled and said: "Come on, let's talk freely. Well, feel free to find faults. In fact, I'm not satisfied with this story. I just want to know how to do it."

Change it, I hope everyone can help me think about it! Well, when the time comes, if it is adopted, we can jointly create this script together."

As soon as Li Yi finished speaking, all the young screenwriters' eyes lit up.

Just kidding, in Li Yi's script, write their names on the signature, what a resume it is, it can be said that the rhythm is soaring.

So everyone began to think hard.

Li Yi was given this opportunity, but whether he could seize it or not depended on whether the opinions they gave were pertinent.

Soon, the first person to raise his hand appeared.

Li Yi was a little surprised, because the person who raised his hand was Lin Junfeng, the screenwriter of "Insurance Fraud".

"Ahem, I'm just speaking a little bit. I'm not saying it well. Please don't take offense to Director Li. In this story, the gang headed by the brain intends to create a murder that seems to be a coincidence. For this reason, every detail must be carefully designed.

, it is undeniable that the design process is indeed a high-intelligence job, but I am thinking that whether it can finally come true is a typical 'people plan, success depends on God', because no matter how good their design is, there is still a decisive factor in their design.

Factors that cannot be controlled." Lin Junfeng said.

Li Yi nodded and signaled him to continue.

"For example, in the case at the beginning of the story, if the victim had closed the driver's window, obviously there would be no further consequences; after the victim was soaked in water, he would most likely have parked the car on the spot or failed to park it.

Under the glass window of the bookstore; further back, the victim is also very likely to just remove the banner from the car instead of tearing the banner down... I mean, the gang that designed the unexpected brain, they can't
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